How To Elevator Pitch - Part II

Ready for it? Think I have my Elevator Pitch completed. This came to me just as I was dozing off last night, of course, so I had my husband who was still up on his Ipad write it down for me...thanks babe!

"Hi my name is Lisa Lee. I'm a stay at home mom of 3 beautiful babies and wife to one tall roofing contractor. In order to keep from losing my sanity on a daily basis I try to incorporate creativity into my everyday life. I'm an avid DIY'er who specializes in recycling and upcycling cast off furniture pieces with a little paint and staple gun. I also love interior design  and jewelry design.  I write about all of this on my blog....lisajaynelee.blogspot.com."

What do you think? I'm not sure I can actually "pitch" this in a elevator. Maybe out to left field? Lol...did Martha Stewart have to write an elevator pitch?.....